Count your Blessings

[billy]

i'm with addy.

i love theme and content.

if i had a little niggle it would be;

My husband Rick
who loves me with all his might
and is trying his best to
hold my heart tenderly.

to

My husband Rick
who loves me with all his might
while trying his best to
hold my heart tenderly.

have a check to see if any of the small words can go or be changed to make it flow a little better.
sometimes looking after the small words can make a big difference.

other than that i love the airiness of it. it feels thankful which is what the poem is all about. and fresh.