06-08-2010, 01:21 PM
As another phobic - in my case, a near-crippling fear of heights - I know how much a phobia can really negatively affect a person. I applaud you for your bravery in sharing this with us.
PS: I like the rhyme and rhythm of this poem. I may be reading too much into this, but I think it simulates the frantically-beating heart very well. Any person who's ever been scared shitless knows that feeling, and you conveyed it well. Bravo.
PS: I like the rhyme and rhythm of this poem. I may be reading too much into this, but I think it simulates the frantically-beating heart very well. Any person who's ever been scared shitless knows that feeling, and you conveyed it well. Bravo.