06-08-2010, 12:49 PM
Addy: I was, in fact trying to give it magic show-gone-wrong kind of feel. 
Well done! And thank you for the compliment on that first stanza; I was wondering if it should be restructured, but if you guys think it's fine, I think I can stick with it.
Well done! And thank you for the compliment on that first stanza; I was wondering if it should be restructured, but if you guys think it's fine, I think I can stick with it.