Poem: Train

Poem: Train

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06-08-2010, 09:46 AM

Excellent poem, the form looks pretty much perfect to me Smile

I really felt the tension there, and was really holding my breath!

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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Poem: Train - by digna_sofia - 06-01-2010, 05:39 PM

RE: Poem: Train - by billy - 06-01-2010, 06:02 PM

RE: Poem: Train - by digna_sofia - 06-02-2010, 09:25 AM

RE: Poem: Train - by mrmod - 06-03-2010, 08:31 AM

RE: Poem: Train - by digna_sofia - 06-07-2010, 05:11 PM

RE: Poem: Train - by mrmod - 06-08-2010, 04:06 AM

RE: Poem: Train - by billy - 06-08-2010, 09:19 AM

RE: Poem: Train - by billy - 06-07-2010, 05:28 PM

RE: Poem: Train - by addy - 06-08-2010, 09:46 AM

RE: Poem: Train - by digna_sofia - 06-08-2010, 11:09 AM

RE: Poem: Train - by addy - 06-08-2010, 11:25 AM

RE: Poem: Train - by jekupsiller - 07-31-2010, 01:36 PM

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