Poem: Train
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(06-08-2010, 04:06 AM)SidewaysDan Wrote:  Can't wait to see some more Smile.

And Billy, are you becoming mature ConfusedHuh??
when i told DS that i never saw the perv side, she rebuked me with;

that's because you're my step dad Hysterical

normally i do try and find extra levels of a write even if they're not intended.

truthfully i just saw a good hoenst straightforward poem.

if the writer indeed did intend it to work on both levels, then it's extra masterful, because when one see's or it's pointed out it carries that WOW factor.

that you saw it (whether she intended it that way or not says much about your powers of observation....you twat. well done Wink (meant in a good way )
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Messages In This Thread
Poem: Train - by digna_sofia - 06-01-2010, 05:39 PM
RE: Poem: Train - by billy - 06-01-2010, 06:02 PM
RE: Poem: Train - by digna_sofia - 06-02-2010, 09:25 AM
RE: Poem: Train - by mrmod - 06-03-2010, 08:31 AM
RE: Poem: Train - by digna_sofia - 06-07-2010, 05:11 PM
RE: Poem: Train - by mrmod - 06-08-2010, 04:06 AM
RE: Poem: Train - by billy - 06-08-2010, 09:19 AM
RE: Poem: Train - by billy - 06-07-2010, 05:28 PM
RE: Poem: Train - by addy - 06-08-2010, 09:46 AM
RE: Poem: Train - by digna_sofia - 06-08-2010, 11:09 AM
RE: Poem: Train - by addy - 06-08-2010, 11:25 AM
RE: Poem: Train - by jekupsiller - 07-31-2010, 01:36 PM
RE: Poem: Train - by Bianca Alabaster - 08-11-2010, 10:07 AM



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