06-08-2010, 08:47 AM
Thanks for sharing this. I don't think it really needs more verses, but this is your piece and thats up to you.
It struck me how this works on other levels as well, not just agoraphobia, but that universal fear of feeling vulnerable and exposed that drives us to isolation even if its just on the emotional level ("knowing I'd be safer on the inside")
It struck me how this works on other levels as well, not just agoraphobia, but that universal fear of feeling vulnerable and exposed that drives us to isolation even if its just on the emotional level ("knowing I'd be safer on the inside")
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?