Reason (Rough)

[billy]

Resist the urge to tempt me
Amorphous honeyed thought
The things you say shall surely end in stings

Great minds have moved, removed me
Enchanted, inked and stilled
My time for humming's ceased indefinitely
In undulating silence
Nomadic radical
Integrity is standing at my guard

So shall you hear it thrumming
If you should ever try
Grasp for my mind to see if you still can
No, sadly, honeyed thought, you'll find you can't

for me, the honeyed in amorphous honeyed thought feels a bit of a misnomer as honeyed defines the amorphous. (even though it would lack any shape per say)

i do love the way you extend the thread of honey into the sting
for me it feels like;

Integrity is standing at my guard is a little forced in order to fit into the acrosticity of the poem. (hey, i just made up a new word)

the craft is excellent. though again for me, considering the poem is about the twins, the language feels a little haughty and may help with some juxtaposition of your choosing.

i have to admit to being at a loss as to the rat in rat Gemini sign?

i really enjoyed the 2nd stanza
specially this part ;

Great minds have moved, removed me
Enchanted, inked and stilled
My time

as always, your a pleasure to read. hard to decipher but definitely a pleasure to read. thanks

i had to inquire about the rat you fink and i love it.

i asked your sister and was told....wait for it ....you were born in the year of the rat. which makes the actual caps of the acrostic deliciously delish