10-31-2026, 01:10 AM
(10-30-2026, 07:34 PM)Luckieman Wrote: The first and second stanzas mean nothing to me (quite apart from trying unsuccsessfully to tease out meaning, I'm deeply worried by the grammar). The third and fourth stanzas stand alone as a interesting image (a poem in their own right?) but the clarity might be improved by some additional punctuation.if loss be all that life will cost, my youth be just a road I crossed
"If the price of life is to experience loss, then my youth may as well be just a road I crossed"