10-25-2026, 06:47 AM
(10-25-2026, 06:14 AM)matsunosuperfan Wrote: Haiku“Sad and heavy” is the sort of abstraction that is the opposite of haiku
When I'm sad and heavy
rain falls in the street, I smile
watching my dog run
Rain falls in the street
My dog runs:
I smile.
Would be closer to the spirit, though it too is horrible

