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Haiku (Dogwood flowers)
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10-23-2026, 06:15 PM
(10-23-2026, 06:12 AM)matsunosuperfan Wrote: Haikuthe abstraction of 'worthy of remembering' throws me off. something like Dogwood....somwhere: / I remember / the weight of your hand (syllable count aside) would be more akin to the immediate 'picture' that haiku paints (though I personally don't like the form) |
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Haiku (Dogwood flowers) - by matsunosuperfan - 10-23-2026, 06:12 AM
RE: Haiku (Dogwood flowers) - by RiverNotch - 10-23-2026, 12:55 PM
RE: Haiku (Dogwood flowers) - by matsunosuperfan - 10-23-2026, 01:48 PM
RE: Haiku (Dogwood flowers) - by RiverNotch - 10-23-2026, 07:27 PM
RE: Haiku (Dogwood flowers) - by busker - 10-23-2026, 06:15 PM
RE: Haiku (Dogwood flowers) - by milo - 10-23-2026, 11:17 PM
RE: Haiku (Dogwood flowers) - by matsunosuperfan - 10-24-2026, 02:37 PM
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