Yesterday, 12:42 AM
i like the overall concept of the poem, but as someone else said eternal night feels kind of overused, maybe shortening it to "eternity" has other effect?
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about a real event - by Luckieman - 09-21-2026, 08:24 PM
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RE: about a real event - by Luckieman - 09-21-2026, 09:57 PM
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RE: about a real event - by piscui - Yesterday, 12:42 AM
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