The problem with poetry
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(7 hours ago)matsunosuperfan Wrote:  
(7 hours ago)Luckieman Wrote:  
(7 hours ago)matsunosuperfan Wrote:  ah yes the standard wan default to "its all a matter of taste"

I have no problem being prejudiced against bad poetry

It's two of y'all now gassing up that doggerel romance poem. That poem sucks. No version of that poem will ever get published in a reputable journal, because it isn't any good. It has the sensibility and approach of a teenager who has been weaned on Dungeons and Dragons.
which poem are you referring to? Posted here?
The one that goes, like,

Come my lover sing the song
As we ride the waves
It will not be very long
You will misbehave

or wtf ever
Had it been written a hundred years ago, it could easily have been published in Poetry magazine

But also, excuse me, you say Anne Carson is one of the four or five greatest?
What utter drivel is this?
The same old white woman bellyaching. If you didn’t grow up in the hood, you’re not allowed to whinge. And the LGBTQIA+++ aren’t allowed to complain unless they Mutawwa is after them with the musings of Imam Hanbal as grounds for punishment 

A wife is in the grip of being.
Easy to say Why not give up on this?
But let's suppose your husband and a certain dark woman
like to meet at a bar in early afternoon.
Love is not conditional.
Living is very conditional.
The wife positions herself in an enclosed verandah across the street.
Watches the dark woman
reach out to touch his temple as if filtering something onto it.
Watches him
bend slightly towards the woman then back. They are both serious.
Their seriousness wracks her.
People who can be serious together, it goes deep.
They have a bottle of mineral water on the table between them
and two glasses.
No inebriants necessary!
When did he develop
this puritan new taste?
A cold ship

moves out of harbor somewhere way inside the wife
and slides off towards the flat grey horizon,

not a bird not a breath in sight.
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Messages In This Thread
The problem with poetry - by busker - 09-14-2026, 11:24 AM
RE: The problem with poetry - by milo - 09-14-2026, 11:30 AM
RE: The problem with poetry - by busker - 09-14-2026, 11:37 AM
RE: The problem with poetry - by milo - 09-14-2026, 11:49 AM
RE: The problem with poetry - by busker - 09-14-2026, 12:15 PM
RE: The problem with poetry - by Luckieman - 09-22-2026, 03:41 AM
RE: The problem with poetry - by matsunosuperfan - 09-14-2026, 01:37 PM
RE: The problem with poetry - by busker - 09-14-2026, 01:48 PM
RE: The problem with poetry - by milo - 09-14-2026, 05:47 PM
RE: The problem with poetry - by matsunosuperfan - 09-14-2026, 11:47 PM
RE: The problem with poetry - by milo - 09-15-2026, 12:24 AM
RE: The problem with poetry - by matsunosuperfan - 09-15-2026, 12:38 AM
RE: The problem with poetry - by milo - 09-15-2026, 01:02 AM
RE: The problem with poetry - by matsunosuperfan - 09-14-2026, 02:08 PM
RE: The problem with poetry - by RiverNotch - 09-14-2026, 07:45 PM
RE: The problem with poetry - by busker - 09-14-2026, 07:48 PM
RE: The problem with poetry - by RiverNotch - 09-14-2026, 08:41 PM
RE: The problem with poetry - by wasellajam - 09-14-2026, 09:30 PM
RE: The problem with poetry - by wasellajam - 09-15-2026, 01:06 AM
RE: The problem with poetry - by milo - 09-15-2026, 01:37 AM
RE: The problem with poetry - by busker - 09-15-2026, 04:01 AM
RE: The problem with poetry - by Bunx - 09-16-2026, 09:53 AM
RE: The problem with poetry - by busker - 7 hours ago



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