A Gardeners Fall
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milo- I tried my best to alter the poem slightly to reflect some changes. One being the last line and the other being S3.
I don't feel super confident about the changes but I feel it adds a little mystery to the poem.
Thanks again for the feedback
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Bunx
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A Gardeners Fall - by Bunx - 09-04-2026, 07:21 AM
RE: A Gardeners Fall - by matsunosuperfan - 09-04-2026, 09:58 AM
RE: A Gardeners Fall - by Bunx - 09-04-2026, 11:17 AM
RE: A Gardeners Fall - by wasellajam - 09-04-2026, 07:40 PM
RE: A Gardeners Fall - by matsunosuperfan - 09-04-2026, 09:55 PM
RE: A Gardeners Fall - by Bunx - 09-04-2026, 11:50 PM
RE: A Gardeners Fall - by matsunosuperfan - 09-06-2026, 03:29 PM
RE: A Gardeners Fall - by matsunosuperfan - 09-07-2026, 12:58 AM
RE: A Gardeners Fall - by Bunx - 09-07-2026, 11:01 PM
RE: A Gardeners Fall - by milo - 09-07-2026, 11:23 PM
RE: A Gardeners Fall - by Bunx - 09-08-2026, 01:21 AM
RE: A Gardeners Fall - by milo - 09-08-2026, 01:23 AM
RE: A Gardeners Fall - by Bunx - 09-08-2026, 02:13 AM
RE: A Gardeners Fall - by Bunx - 09-10-2026, 09:52 AM



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