How Time Passes

[matsunosuperfan]

Hi, matsuno, plenty to like here, some notes:


Thanks for the read.

Thanks for the notes! I really kind of hate this ending. Great call about the second "you" being more confusing than compelling. I don't think I'll pick this one back up again but it was a productive exercise. I learned something, maybe <3

Avoiding the pain of the edit? Almost don't blame you.

MAYBE L8ER K XD