07-04-2026, 07:08 AM
I found it fake, for the following reasons:
The first line of S2 clarifies that the poem js no longer going to be about S1 but escaping the grand themes
The tech bro / Musk / Trump / Tusk connection - legitimately tied up - is dismissed as “contemporary”. What’s the problem with it being that?
The part about self deprecation vs flourish - why can’t it be both?
It’s just observations that are legit on the surface because they are well written
The only criticism I find valid is that “it’s not memorable”. Ok.
It misses the fact that “heat death of the universe” is borderline Reddit cliche
But it’s interesting to see that two other people agreed with the AI. That’s good to know.
The first line of S2 clarifies that the poem js no longer going to be about S1 but escaping the grand themes
The tech bro / Musk / Trump / Tusk connection - legitimately tied up - is dismissed as “contemporary”. What’s the problem with it being that?
The part about self deprecation vs flourish - why can’t it be both?
It’s just observations that are legit on the surface because they are well written
The only criticism I find valid is that “it’s not memorable”. Ok.
It misses the fact that “heat death of the universe” is borderline Reddit cliche
But it’s interesting to see that two other people agreed with the AI. That’s good to know.