v5. Greenware

v5. Greenware

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07-02-2026, 08:50 AM

(07-02-2026, 04:19 AM)alonso ramoran Wrote: edit bump!

By far the best draft thus far. More cohesive, and both rhyme and vernacular are more convincing. Good revision.

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RE: v5. Greenware - by matsunosuperfan - 07-02-2026, 08:50 AM

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