06-30-2026, 01:18 AM
(06-08-2026, 04:26 AM)Wjames Wrote: Open the window and runlovely imagery. nice rhythm, too. love the ambiguity of much of the diction, like "paint the base"
your paint through a sieve.
Paint the base flamingo:
velvet with potash, speckle blue.
Bathe and dress for brunch in Celestùn:
open toe linens, vertical stripe mimosas,
lavender cream.
the last two lines are a pleasant surprise.
you've got the wrong diacritic for "Celestún"

