Distemper
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(06-08-2026, 04:26 AM)Wjames Wrote:  Open the window and run
your paint through a sieve.

Paint the base flamingo:
velvet with potash, speckle blue.

Bathe and dress for brunch in Celestùn:
open toe linens, vertical stripe mimosas,
lavender cream.
lovely imagery. nice rhythm, too. love the ambiguity of much of the diction, like "paint the base" 
the last two lines are a pleasant surprise. 

you've got the wrong diacritic for "Celestún"
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Distemper - by Wjames - 06-08-2026, 04:26 AM
RE: Distemper - by dukealien - 06-08-2026, 09:59 PM
RE: Distemper - by brynmawr1 - 06-09-2026, 06:19 AM
RE: Distemper - by Wjames - 06-23-2026, 03:01 AM
RE: Distemper - by matsunosuperfan - 06-30-2026, 01:18 AM



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