06-19-2026, 03:18 PM
(04-26-2026, 01:59 AM)sad_bunny Wrote: Do you?Maybe something more like:
Do you ever wonder why
The sun sets and the moon shines?
But you stay the same
Never changing
Always so dark and sad.
Do you ever think about how
The moon can be just as bright
Even on the darkest night.
Does it ever cross your mind
That maybe you’re not alone
In this thing called life.
Why does the sun set
but the moon shines? Meanwhile
you stay the same, a constant
always-dark-and-sad.
But have you stopped
in clouded night, to find the moon
still just as bright?
Does it ever cross your mind--
Why does the sun set,
but the moon shines?
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I have a strong impulse to use a refrain here, idk. Feels right to me. This small, insistent aphoristic germ. Nice work.

