Do you?
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(04-26-2026, 01:59 AM)sad_bunny Wrote:  Do you? 

Do you ever wonder why
The sun sets and the moon shines?
But you stay the same
Never changing 
Always so dark and sad.

Do you ever think about how
The moon can be just as bright
Even on the darkest night.

Does it ever cross your mind
That maybe you’re not alone 
In this thing called life.
Maybe something more like:

Why does the sun set 
but the moon shines? Meanwhile
you stay the same, a constant
always-dark-and-sad. 

But have you stopped 
in clouded night, to find the moon
still just as bright? 

Does it ever cross your mind--
Why does the sun set, 
but the moon shines? 


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I have a strong impulse to use a refrain here, idk. Feels right to me. This small, insistent aphoristic germ. Nice work.
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Messages In This Thread
Do you? - by sad_bunny - 04-26-2026, 01:59 AM
RE: Do you? - by Stan - 04-26-2026, 10:00 PM
RE: Do you? - by sad_bunny - 04-30-2026, 02:43 AM
RE: Do you? - by wasellajam - 04-27-2026, 08:35 PM
RE: Do you? - by JohnS - 04-29-2026, 06:56 PM
RE: Do you? - by aaminarrh - 04-30-2026, 01:42 PM
RE: Do you? - by N.A. - 06-18-2026, 10:26 AM
RE: Do you? - by matsunosuperfan - 06-19-2026, 03:18 PM



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