v3. Greenware

v3. Greenware

alonso ramoran Offline

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06-04-2026, 10:06 AM

Big thank you to matsuno for the thorough feedback, which reminded me of some guiding practices/principles when writing traditional verse. Hope this edit sets the poem on the right path. If not, as always I'm open to thoughts and suggestions.

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v3. Greenware - by alonso ramoran - 05-20-2026, 11:30 PM

RE: Greenware - by dukealien - 05-21-2026, 07:50 AM

RE: Greenware - by RiverNotch - 05-21-2026, 11:20 AM

RE: Greenware - by wasellajam - 05-24-2026, 10:40 PM

RE: Greenware - by milo - 05-25-2026, 07:50 AM

RE: Greenware - by wasellajam - 05-25-2026, 09:05 AM

RE: v2. Greenware - by alonso ramoran - 05-26-2026, 10:19 AM

RE: v2. Greenware - by matsunosuperfan - 05-26-2026, 05:30 PM

RE: v3. Greenware - by alonso ramoran - 06-04-2026, 10:06 AM

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