Haiku
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(05-26-2026, 06:41 PM)JohnS Wrote:  spun with silver thread,
strung with pearls of morning dew -
the fly doesn't see
As a bit of a spider-fancier, I give this full marks.  Wondering about the em dash:  I think it's correct, there's more than just pearls the fly's compound eyes miss.
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Haiku - by JohnS - 05-26-2026, 06:41 PM
RE: Haiku - by wasellajam - 05-26-2026, 09:05 PM
RE: Haiku - by JohnS - 05-26-2026, 10:01 PM
RE: Haiku - by dukealien - 05-26-2026, 09:50 PM
RE: Haiku - by busker - 05-26-2026, 09:54 PM



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