Absence and Antinomy, v3
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(05-11-2026, 12:51 PM)RiverNotch Wrote:  Absence and Antinomy


I cannot say which system is the worse.
In America, there was simply no sign that the pot
was ever owned by someone else: most places

had names in the tongues of their conquerors, most faces
were white or black or even my shape and color,
and there were no honors---no monuments nor exhibits

outside of museums---afforded to their first nations,
while in Australia a heritage more diverse
is championed by place names more byzantine, statues in public

more angular, murals more nonrealistic, and beggars
more universally dark, squat, and ragged.
Is it better to suffer such contradiction
or to be so thoroughly forgotten?


Another NaPM entry.
Interesting comparison. L1 needs work but otherwise the poem reads well to me. 
I would question the use of the past tense to state the US view - "in America, there was....", it could imply it is no longer the case.
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Messages In This Thread
Absence and Antinomy, v3 - by RiverNotch - 05-11-2026, 12:51 PM
RE: Absence and Antinomy - by alonso ramoran - 05-13-2026, 10:27 PM
RE: Absence and Antinomy - by JohnS - 05-14-2026, 02:27 AM
RE: Absence and Antinomy - by wasellajam - 05-14-2026, 04:55 AM
RE: Absence and Antinomy - by RiverNotch - 05-14-2026, 04:42 PM
RE: Absence and Antinomy - by milo - 05-14-2026, 08:55 PM
RE: Absence and Antinomy - by wasellajam - 05-14-2026, 08:57 PM
RE: Absence and Antinomy, v2 - by RiverNotch - 05-15-2026, 12:06 PM
RE: Absence and Antinomy, v2 - by busker - 05-17-2026, 04:47 AM
RE: Absence and Antinomy, v3 - by RiverNotch - 05-20-2026, 01:48 PM



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