Merlin's Cave
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I have came back to this poem like over 5-6 times since you posted it. Definitely one of my favorites of yours. This is one of those poems that if I saw in crit I wouldn't give much feedback in fear of messing up a great piece. The thing I do love about alot of you're writing is the references and how much there is to learning within a poem that is completely relatable.
Thanks for the read
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Merlin's Cave - by rowens - 04-28-2026, 11:15 PM
RE: Merlin's Cave - by dukealien - 04-29-2026, 10:21 AM
RE: Merlin's Cave - by rowens - 04-30-2026, 11:15 PM
RE: Merlin's Cave - by Bunx - 05-11-2026, 04:50 AM
RE: Merlin's Cave - by rowens - 05-14-2026, 12:52 AM
RE: Merlin's Cave - by busker - 05-17-2026, 04:52 AM
RE: Merlin's Cave - by rowens - 05-17-2026, 11:41 PM



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