Calderón's Russia v2
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(05-09-2026, 09:59 AM)RiverNotch Wrote:  Thanks for the feedback. Altered the repeated line to make the narrative a little more clear. As for the title and the narrative's source:

Calderon here refers to Calderón de la Barca, so this is just a riff on his much better dramatic poem La vida es sueño, in English Life Is a Dream. Finally added the diacritic to hopefully clarify.
Did a lil research and read a bit of a monologue by Sigismundo. I think it would be interesting to see a version of your piece from the 1st person POV of one of the characters. The narration does still feel a tad bit cold.
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Calderón's Russia v2 - by RiverNotch - 05-05-2026, 11:21 AM
RE: Calderon's Russia - by alonso ramoran - 05-07-2026, 01:06 AM
RE: Calderon's Russia v2 - by RiverNotch - 05-09-2026, 09:59 AM
RE: Calderon's Russia v2 - by alonso ramoran - 05-10-2026, 08:22 AM



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