Havana

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Havana,


A worn-out diva dressed to look fine, first setting a performance venue, must be a metaphor for the city
still on the stage
but forgetting her lines. All flair

A ’56 Chevy made to look new, very american
running quite well
‘till the head gasket blew second hand, different setting though, maybe a metaphor for the people

A mural of Che in his beret, different person now, who is wearing the beret?
waving his fist,
slowly fading away contrasting the car and the diva, also fading

Crumbling facades on tired avenues the rhythm is clunky here id write 'crumbling facades, worn avenues' still kinda stretched though
and unpaved streets
where the kids have no shoes, I appreciate the sentiment but bored with the result, kids have no shoes is in every song, is there anything else about the streets? Unrest? Filth? 

Somewhere a horn is blowing the blues why the blues?

I can feel the atmosphere, that might be enough for you, or you could make more scenes and paint a big picture, sorry it's more than basic but I think it's got potential