v3 - Occultation
#7
Not much to criticise on top of what previous posters have already said, other than to say I love this.

This line: "Why did I
not feel sadness, until another
felt sadness for me?

is a killer.

Well done
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v3 - Occultation - by alonso ramoran - 04-25-2026, 02:18 AM
RE: Occultation - by wasellajam - 04-27-2026, 09:55 PM
RE: Occultation - by CRNDLSM - 04-27-2026, 10:05 PM
RE: v2 - Occultation - by alonso ramoran - 04-28-2026, 03:01 AM
RE: v2 - Occultation - by wasellajam - 04-28-2026, 06:33 PM
RE: v2 - Occultation - by alonso ramoran - 04-28-2026, 09:45 PM
RE: v3 - Occultation - by JamesG - 9 hours ago



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