I Sink Irony

[wasellajam]

I have completely reworked this poem, and it definitely deserves a second look.

Hi, Deor, it can be confusing to come back to a thread and find the original poem gone. Here’s our preferred way to post an edit:

When doing an edit:

Try to always do the edit or revision above your original
just go to the opening post and click on edit
Then edit your poem;

1st Edit or 1st Revision(the choice is yours)

blah blah black sheep
have you any wool?
sfvblqjahbfjb
hfajbfjkbf

Original version;

blah blah balck sleep
lhcs;kjbf;akbjf;a
sfvblqjahbfjb
hfajbfjkbf

If you put this (without the space after the slash) around the old one it will hide it but leave it accessible.
[pre verse] [/ pre verse]