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Agoraphobia/Anxiety

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06-03-2010, 07:44 AM

it's a bit long for the short poetry forum dubs so i've moved it to the mild crit forum..billy

knowing a poem is about a real thing makes feedback on it's craft unnecessary.
can anything be done about it?
i found the poem to be very sad. sometimes life seems so unfair.

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Agoraphobia/Anxiety - by DUBLIN5 - 06-02-2010, 09:51 PM

RE: Agoraphobia/Anxiety - by billy - 06-03-2010, 07:44 AM

RE: Agoraphobia/Anxiety - by DUBLIN5 - 06-03-2010, 07:47 AM

RE: Agoraphobia/Anxiety - by kath3 - 06-06-2010, 01:18 AM

RE: Agoraphobia/Anxiety - by billy - 06-03-2010, 12:21 PM

RE: Agoraphobia/Anxiety - by DUBLIN5 - 06-03-2010, 12:25 PM

RE: Agoraphobia/Anxiety - by Bianca Alabaster - 06-03-2010, 02:52 PM

RE: Agoraphobia/Anxiety - by DUBLIN5 - 06-06-2010, 01:47 AM

RE: Agoraphobia/Anxiety - by srijantje - 06-06-2010, 10:18 AM

RE: Agoraphobia/Anxiety - by addy - 06-08-2010, 08:47 AM

RE: Agoraphobia/Anxiety - by digna_sofia - 06-08-2010, 01:21 PM

RE: Agoraphobia/Anxiety - by DUBLIN5 - 06-08-2010, 10:02 PM

RE: Agoraphobia/Anxiety - by Loveblind - 06-09-2010, 06:42 AM

RE: Agoraphobia/Anxiety - by DUBLIN5 - 06-10-2010, 03:26 AM

RE: Agoraphobia/Anxiety - by srijantje - 06-10-2010, 10:16 AM

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