Love Isn't About the Person
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(04-14-2026, 01:16 AM)rowens Wrote:  Elder Standards


If sexual humor is so immature,
why is it censored and only for mature audiences?

The word and is doing double-work.
In both of your poems? I only see it as plus, in addition. Can you explain it to me on an English Language Poetry For Dummies level?

Love Isn't About the Person

Personality is the icing on the cake.

It's not particularly good for you,
the first bite's a rush
and its domination's a cheap trick.

Does the "and" change mine?
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Messages In This Thread
Love Isn't About the Person - by rowens - 04-13-2026, 11:42 PM
RE: Love Isn't About the Person - by wasellajam - 04-13-2026, 11:51 PM
RE: Love Isn't About the Person - by rowens - 04-14-2026, 01:16 AM
RE: Love Isn't About the Person - by wasellajam - 04-14-2026, 01:41 AM
RE: Love Isn't About the Person - by rowens - 04-14-2026, 02:55 AM
RE: Love Isn't About the Person - by wasellajam - 04-14-2026, 03:38 AM
RE: Love Isn't About the Person - by rowens - 04-14-2026, 09:16 AM
RE: Love Isn't About the Person - by wasellajam - 04-14-2026, 09:53 AM
RE: Love Isn't About the Person - by rowens - 04-14-2026, 10:19 AM



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