Welcome to my world of optimism
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The rhyming couplets (I assume “feed” is meant to be “fed”) do not roll off the tongue well with had/sad below it.
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Welcome to my world of optimism - by Smiley - 04-03-2026, 02:54 AM
RE: Welcome to my world of optimism - by Smiley - 04-05-2026, 04:01 AM
RE: Welcome to my world of optimism - by MalingeringDove - 04-08-2026, 12:55 AM
RE: Welcome to my world of optimism - by Smiley - 04-08-2026, 03:16 AM



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