04-07-2026, 06:44 PM
Nice poem, I like the idea, however wrong it may seem, of a song having a 'smell'
and although I really like the imagery at the end my first thought was, "can you get orange molasses?"
is 'a kind of magic' cliché? probably not if it was in quotation marks, then I would see it as a musical reference to the Queen song.
Welcome to the site,
Cheers for the read.
and although I really like the imagery at the end my first thought was, "can you get orange molasses?"
is 'a kind of magic' cliché? probably not if it was in quotation marks, then I would see it as a musical reference to the Queen song.
Welcome to the site,
Cheers for the read.
wae aye man ye radgie