2026 NaPM 4 April
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(04-05-2026, 03:41 AM)JohnS Wrote:  Havana

'56 Chevy made to look fine
like a worn out diva
dressed to the nines,
still on stage
but forgetting her lines.

Crumbling facades on tired avenues,
streets where kids have no shoes,
where hopelessness looms.

Somewhere a horn is blowing the blues.
Very nice - good rhymes and near-rhymes  appropriately placed.  Good beat.
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2026 NaPM 4 April - by RiverNotch - 04-03-2026, 09:01 PM
RE: 2026 NaPM 4 April - by Mark A Becker - 04-03-2026, 10:54 PM
RE: 2026 NaPM 4 April - by ilovewomenandbeer - 04-03-2026, 11:14 PM
RE: 2026 NaPM 4 April - by dukealien - 04-04-2026, 04:37 AM
RE: 2026 NaPM 4 April - by CRNDLSM - 04-04-2026, 08:44 AM
RE: 2026 NaPM 4 April - by Truerenigma - 04-04-2026, 01:49 PM
RE: 2026 NaPM 4 April - by RiverNotch - 04-04-2026, 03:47 PM
RE: 2026 NaPM 4 April - by wasellajam - 04-04-2026, 09:27 PM
RE: 2026 NaPM 4 April - by JohnS - 04-05-2026, 03:41 AM
RE: 2026 NaPM 4 April - by dukealien - 04-05-2026, 03:47 AM
RE: 2026 NaPM 4 April - by fastmarshmallow - 04-05-2026, 08:05 AM
RE: 2026 NaPM 4 April - by Magpie - 04-05-2026, 03:00 PM
RE: 2026 NaPM 4 April - by Wjames - 04-13-2026, 02:24 AM



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