April Grins

[alonso ramoran]

I thought there was a somewhat missed opportunity to echo the spirit that that piece was written in...

But I sense that that is probably a poem you didn't want to write.

Well alonso,
My poem is intentionally lighthearted. You are certainly welcome to write a version to echo the spirit that Eliot wrote in. 
... Mark 

the first section of the waste land's structure does sound lovely. i can definitely see why you wanted to write a lighthearted poem in its fashion. appreciate your sharing it