Narcissus In Venusian Clothes

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Maybe:

for falling for a surface lay,
upon a turd of misery


Here's what you should tell your newly single friend:

First Impressions are for Prom Night Dumpsters

True colors come out
when there is no doubt.

A creep from the start
comes clean with clear heart.

Delayed reaction. Poking around the practice threads I read Leanne's intro into Narrative:

"Lays: The lay is most commonly a long romantic tale, made popular by the French troubadours but probably of Celtic origins, as revived by W.B. Yeats in “The Wanderings of Oisin” or “The Lay of the Last Minstrel” by Walter Scott."

New to me, went above my head, I'll think about your suggestion again, thanks.