Dangling Past Participle (edit)
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Last Saturday morning, I was sitting in my favorite breakfast restaurant.  Beginning to read the news.

The place was just starting to fill up.  One of the staff rushed in, coat on crooked, with a black eye.

The waitresses huddled around her for a few minutes, then she vanished into the kitchen.

The potatoes in the hash were underdone and lumpy.   Better than burnt, I guess.
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Dangling Past Participle (edit) - by wasellajam - 03-19-2026, 02:41 AM
RE: Dangling Pasr Participle - by dukealien - 03-19-2026, 03:44 AM
RE: Dangling Pasr Participle - by wasellajam - 03-19-2026, 04:09 AM
RE: Dangling Past Participle - by Bunx - 04-09-2026, 02:27 AM
RE: Dangling Past Participle - by wasellajam - 04-09-2026, 03:28 AM
RE: Dangling Past Participle - by Truerenigma - 04-12-2026, 02:42 AM
RE: Dangling Past Participle - by wasellajam - 04-12-2026, 03:09 AM
RE: Dangling Past Participle - by Truerenigma - 04-12-2026, 03:18 AM
RE: Dangling Past Participle - by wasellajam - 04-12-2026, 03:31 AM
RE: Dangling Past Participle - by Truerenigma - 04-12-2026, 03:38 AM



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