I Am Still Here
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(03-18-2026, 04:13 PM)wasellajam Wrote:  
(03-18-2026, 10:14 AM)Surfpup Wrote:  
(03-18-2026, 09:55 AM)wasellajam Wrote:  If you decide you do want to change the alignment you can do it from the tool bar above the window when you post or edit.

The capitalization can be turned off in device settings but I sometimes type one handed only because I have a cat on my lap and the shift is quite a stretch so it might be best for you to leave it as is.
Alright, so I don't know if I'm not interested in 'finding my way back', should I change it to, 'finding my way back on track'? Thanks.
Piece by piece, day by day,
I am finding back my way.


'finding my way back on track' is a good line but you'll need to rhyme with day or change both lines.

You might be interested in taking a look at the Poetry Practice Exercises. Each thread is a different form with interesting rhyme schemes and refrains. They're not polished poems, just practice and plenty of chitchat about meter, rhyme and refrains. Some time when you're in the mood for a puzzle try one. If you read through the threads one will probably pull you in.
All right, I just changed it to 'finding my way back'. It's simple enough. Thank you.
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Messages In This Thread
I Am Still Here - by Surfpup - 03-18-2026, 07:49 AM
RE: I Am Still Here - by wasellajam - 03-18-2026, 08:59 AM
RE: I Am Still Here - by Surfpup - 03-18-2026, 09:24 AM
RE: I Am Still Here - by wasellajam - 03-18-2026, 09:55 AM
RE: I Am Still Here - by Surfpup - 03-18-2026, 10:14 AM
RE: I Am Still Here - by wasellajam - 03-18-2026, 04:13 PM
RE: I Am Still Here - by Surfpup - 03-18-2026, 08:39 PM



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