Narcissus In Venusian Clothes

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Really well executed... Brilliant title

I particularly like the lines 'the suffocated residue' and 'upon a turd of misery'

no biggy but - is there an extra beat in the last line? Could change 'towards' into 'to'

Thanks for the read and inspiration, I googled from yours, guessing you googled from elsewhere.
Yeah, I know someone who just shed one of those after 30 years, all is light and joy in the world now.

Ugh, I just had this discussion with duke, that troublemaker "towards", one syllable but always bumping into someone's read, I vow to avoid it in the future, maybe I'll edit it here.

See this interesting clip:
what do you mean I mispronounced it?