03-14-2026, 12:38 AM
Really well executed... Brilliant title
I particularly like the lines 'the suffocated residue' and 'upon a turd of misery'
no biggy but - is there an extra beat in the last line? Could change 'towards' into 'to'
I particularly like the lines 'the suffocated residue' and 'upon a turd of misery'
no biggy but - is there an extra beat in the last line? Could change 'towards' into 'to'
wae aye man ye radgie