The Venusian Arts

[Magpie]

The Venusian Arts

They gather round at six
to swap malevolence
and ready their eager
souls for the brutal hunt.
A song for the Devil.
A poem to Lucifer.

I don't think you need "their"

I like the interesting contrast between the Devil and Lucifer.  Could even go further by picking one of the other devils like Baphomet or something

Thanks, you're right about 'their' it's better without it, I was going for six syllables a line but I can easily remedy that.

I like the idea of using Baphomet as well.

I'll be back with an edit.

Cheers

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Love is a beautiful thing..

Indeed,

cheers for reading