03-08-2026, 12:24 AM
Yes, "crowd" was the point of departure.
The edits are coming along nicely (1.5) - I particularly like
their colored glass adorns the window sill
to capture early evening’s slanted sun—
Had to chuckle about advice leading to improvements. If all my ideas were good, think of the poetry I could write
! Ackshully, all it does is make you live with the poem a little longer... yada oyster, yada grit, yada pearl.
The edits are coming along nicely (1.5) - I particularly like
their colored glass adorns the window sill
to capture early evening’s slanted sun—
Had to chuckle about advice leading to improvements. If all my ideas were good, think of the poetry I could write
! Ackshully, all it does is make you live with the poem a little longer... yada oyster, yada grit, yada pearl.
Non-practicing atheist