I wish

[Mark A Becker]

Hello antonia-
Hope not outta line that I took the liberty to elimnate a lot of words, without changing any, and reconstructed the verses. I did this to show you the parts that struck me :


I wish I were
the way they are with beer
under the sun;

the way they see
a pretty face
and friendly eyes.

So many lucky guys.
Deep inside, the heavy voice
squeezes me.


ps- You need a new title.
Respectfully,
Mark