Personal Poetic Purpose

[Magpie]

Hi quicksilver, this is a bit confusing. 

The alliteration is distracting from writing a poem.

Some of the best phrases are the ones without a 'p' in the line

'Words woven in crystalline lattices'  

Alliteration is good, but not for most of the poem with the same sounds, it becomes problematic and distracts from the narrative. 

Thanks for posting