The second train of thought

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So, i improvise for you a poem
Whilst sitting here at home
Again this time
I write it in rhyme
Waiting for inspiration
That will unite every land and nation
I want world peace, thats all
I heard Gods call (ryhme here feels forced)

Beca?use, thats important to me
To live happy and free
Self development is the key - ryhme feels forced
Against the powers that be - ryhme feels forced also what does power that be mean?
Also love, love and more love, you see - idt i need to say it again
Im pouring my heart out
Thats what this is about

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Fun    what do yall think? I wrote with blood as my ink.

This feels very genuine
 but it feels like you have just said things that ryhme and sometimes unnatural due to trying to ryhme
it also isnt very complex which makes it abit boring
I feel your thought and feelings that you are trying to convey maybe should be more expressive ig?
show not tell is pretty important in poetry imo but even so the yearn for this world peace and spreading love can be shown better through comparing it with something else or just increasing the intensity

(also idk if im being too harsh for basic critique) 
just wanted to share my thoughts

I welcome your thoughts, and i thank u for sharing!