Silver Lining

[Magpie]

Yeah I was wanting the title to be ironic, it was the only way to go with it.

Don't worry about explaining your thought process it can only help with further critique of a poem so it's not a problem.

I will say that I think that the 'but i ... anyways' lines are disarming. To me they give the impression of someone who is quite happy to be inside because that's what they were doing 'anyways'... it's the 'but' and the 'anyways' that seem to give that impression, perhaps if it were worded slightly differently it may convey it better. 

Also the melody and rhythm of the first few lines may lull the reader into a nicer interpretation than what you had wanted.

Thanks