Silver Lining

[wasellajam]

Just a lil short poem that i wrote to test the waters of this forum
I have written some poems already but id just like to post smth simple first

Silver lining

today is a cloudy day

the sun is obscured
the world is tinted gray
but i stay inside anyways

the stars are covered
dimming the night sky
but i was sleeping anyways


:edit: pretty new to this so messed up abit of formatting

Hi, wiz, I haven't read the previous comments, some notes:

I don't think you need the first line when both strophes are cloudy.
All I can get from this is that it's a blessing not having to go out when it's cloudy, not even storming, but cloudy. There may be a metaphor in there but I can't find it. Hopefully someone else will be more helpful. Good luck with it, welcome to the Pen and thanks for posting.