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Yeah, i hear you. I appreciate all of the advices i get on this forum but to be clear, im not going for being a champion myself. I just, like writing poems and i have found that its a special feeling finding others poetry that speaks to me personally.

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And its kind of fun to get feedback from skilled people who know their stuff, but im not only after proffesional opinions.. i want to hear what everyone thinks.

you asked for feedback - I gave feedback - you don't ever have to do anything with it.  Also, who do you think is a professional?

Yes, and i appreciate it. Im just saying, dont expect to much from me. Who is a ”PRO”, it was mostly an expression defining someone who is really good att this.. someone like you as an example.

The only thing I expect from anyone on this site is that they are trying to get honest feedback.  I have seen much worse and I have seen people throw a fit once they realize that everyone didn't immediately love something they produced without any real work so you are doing fine.  Give yourself a break.  Just keep working at it - that's all the rest of us are doing.