02-15-2026, 08:47 AM
It feels like flying with a broken wing
I realised im more than just a thing
Flying there, with the stars up above
Hinting at a message of love
I should maybe start putting my stuff, my work, into the section for gaining critique. I was scared of getting it but i feel thiis is an OK place to get some feedback since i find you guys very friendly and positive. So i startet to crave attention and hearing about it when its was offered with such a spirit. Like a fresh breathe of air! What do you guys think so far about those small poems i have been warming up with?
I realised im more than just a thing
Flying there, with the stars up above
Hinting at a message of love
I should maybe start putting my stuff, my work, into the section for gaining critique. I was scared of getting it but i feel thiis is an OK place to get some feedback since i find you guys very friendly and positive. So i startet to crave attention and hearing about it when its was offered with such a spirit. Like a fresh breathe of air! What do you guys think so far about those small poems i have been warming up with?