Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow
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(02-10-2026, 11:27 PM)wasellajam Wrote:  This is a beauty. Thanks for the lesson in rhyme. Such strong imagery.
I really like the line

"She’s shucked a thousand oysters in this sink
and never found a pearl.'

but followed by "Just one more time" it told me I'd better duck. When she didn't take the things I had a moment of hope, but that didn't last long.

Well done, a keeper.
Thanks for reading and commenting, ella   Blush
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Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow - by milo - 02-10-2026, 10:51 PM
RE: Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow - by milo - 02-11-2026, 04:13 AM



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