02-10-2026, 11:27 PM
This is a beauty. Thanks for the lesson in rhyme. Such strong imagery.
I really like the line
"She’s shucked a thousand oysters in this sink
and never found a pearl.'
but followed by "Just one more time" it told me I'd better duck. When she didn't take the things I had a moment of hope, but that didn't last long.
Well done, a keeper.
I really like the line
"She’s shucked a thousand oysters in this sink
and never found a pearl.'
but followed by "Just one more time" it told me I'd better duck. When she didn't take the things I had a moment of hope, but that didn't last long.
Well done, a keeper.