I wish
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Dissociation is de rigueur.

For this poem, you could try something like rhyming at first, and then rhyming less as you go, and then making so much sense, "I am here, thinking and writing", or something.

Besides all that, you could focus on the heavy voice and the deep inside: those are where the party is.
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I wish - by antonia - 02-10-2026, 04:38 AM
RE: I wish - by rowens - 02-10-2026, 05:26 AM
RE: I wish - by milo - 02-10-2026, 06:58 AM
RE: I wish - by Anima - 02-10-2026, 01:47 PM
RE: I wish - by antonia - 02-10-2026, 10:22 PM
RE: I wish - by johnnyjojo - 02-28-2026, 11:27 AM
RE: I wish - by wasellajam - 03-01-2026, 12:46 AM
RE: I wish - by antonia - 03-02-2026, 05:44 AM
RE: I wish - by wasellajam - 03-02-2026, 05:53 AM
RE: I wish - by BLEACHBOX - 03-01-2026, 05:12 PM
RE: I wish - by Mark A Becker - 03-03-2026, 06:09 AM
RE: I wish - by antonia - 03-04-2026, 04:53 AM



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