Absent Goods - edit
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I used to wonder, hypothetically,
how it must be to live, a Communist,
or as a Russian proletarian
today, accustomed to the empty shelves
of stores where all was scarcity and dust.

Last week I found out from experience
of visiting my local grocery
where much was missing, racks nude, shelves unstocked
because of snow and ice:  trucks had not come.

I only found a little gourmet food
for proletarians had been there first
and bought the rest to feed their families
back home on frozen, white-encrusted streets.


Last stanza edited for a little more image/drama(?) and a vague connection via weather.

(02-08-2026, 10:55 AM)busker Wrote:  The set up was nice, but the ending wasn't really a twist.
The proles buying the gourmet stuff would've been a nice irony.

I don't think the Russians are doing that badly. They have everything they need from the country that actually makes everything.
Your last line is  eloquently ambiguous - is the country that makes everything China (which supplies Russia, for a price) or Russia itself if only it had a mechanism to decide what was actually needed/wanted among all its potential, and distribute it?  Hard crony capitalism (oligarchy) isn't working much better for them  than totalitarian cronyism (Communism as practiced) did.
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Absent Goods - edit - by dukealien - 02-08-2026, 06:39 AM
RE: Absent Goods - by busker - 02-08-2026, 10:55 AM
RE: Absent Goods - by dukealien - 02-10-2026, 05:26 AM
RE: Absent Goods - by busker - 02-10-2026, 06:02 AM
RE: Absent Goods - by dukealien - 02-10-2026, 06:52 AM
RE: Absent Goods - by wasellajam - 02-08-2026, 07:08 PM
RE: Absent Goods - by dukealien - 02-08-2026, 11:06 PM



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