02-10-2026, 05:26 AM
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I used to wonder, hypothetically,
how it must be to live, a Communist,
or as a Russian proletarian
today, accustomed to the empty shelves
of stores where all was scarcity and dust.
Last week I found out from experience
of visiting my local grocery
where much was missing, racks nude, shelves unstocked
because of snow and ice: trucks had not come.
I only found a little gourmet food
for proletarians had been there first
and bought the rest to feed their families
back home on frozen, white-encrusted streets.
Last stanza edited for a little more image/drama(?) and a vague connection via weather.
I used to wonder, hypothetically,
how it must be to live, a Communist,
or as a Russian proletarian
today, accustomed to the empty shelves
of stores where all was scarcity and dust.
Last week I found out from experience
of visiting my local grocery
where much was missing, racks nude, shelves unstocked
because of snow and ice: trucks had not come.
I only found a little gourmet food
for proletarians had been there first
and bought the rest to feed their families
back home on frozen, white-encrusted streets.
Last stanza edited for a little more image/drama(?) and a vague connection via weather.
(02-08-2026, 10:55 AM)busker Wrote: The set up was nice, but the ending wasn't really a twist.
The proles buying the gourmet stuff would've been a nice irony.
I don't think the Russians are doing that badly. They have everything they need from the country that actually makes everything.
Non-practicing atheist

